Usually the difference for me between a book I like and a book I don’t like comes down to the characters. I love quiet books that seemingly do nothing but serve to showcase part of a rich character’s life. Like Olive Kitteridge. But recently I am finding that after strong characterization, I am particularly drawn to a strong sense of place and the way that, in many great books, place becomes another character. One I fall in love with.
Carin Clevidence’s debut, The House on Salt Hay Road, is a rare feat of both character and place. On the eve of World War II in a quiet Long Island town, Nancy and Clay Poole, orphans, move in with their Grandfather Scudder, unmarried uncle Roy, and abandoned aunt Mavis. Initially, it is hard to understand what keeps this family together — Scudder displays his affection for his grandchildren through reserve, Mavis can’t connect to her niece and nephew, Roy is haunted by his past. Clay, twelve, is the only one who seems content with his life of sailing and crabbing. Nancy Poole, nineteen, unbridled, and independent, longs for a more adventurous life. She thinks that is what she has found one day when the fireworks factory explodes and a stranger comes to town to study rare birds. Within weeks, Nancy is engaged and preparing to move to Boston with her new husband. And the family, only tenuously linked before, begins to crumble under the weight of her impending loss.
What the readers, if not always the characters, come to realize is that this dissolution is inevitable — if Nancy didn’t leave, something else would happen that would pull the family in different directions. In fact, the factory explosion at the beginning of the novel catalyzes the more quiet and more natural explosion of lots of things in the family’s life — friends die, literal storms come to change the landscape. Even the threat of World War II on the horizon subtly looms over the novel, reminding the reader that indeed this family, this time, this place will change.
The prose is evocative but simple, and Clevidence masterfully pulled me into a seaside world that I know little about. But I felt like I was there. I felt like I knew these people and this nameless house on Salt Hay Road. It’s a fantastic debut. The scope broadended a little too far for me in the final pages — sweeping out through the whole war. It just felt too big for a book so tightly woven and quiet. Still, my favorite thing about this book is the brother-and-sister story it tells. I love the relationship between Clay and Nancy — the forces the drive them apart as juxtaposed with the love and obligation that eventually always brings them back together. The final lines of the story are my favorites, as Clay returns from the war, missing his sister and preparing to reconcile with her,
He is going to see his sister, he reminds himself, he will finally tell her he is sorry. For a moment he can’t remember why. And then it comes back to him how he went out to the beach that morning when he should have been at school. He shouldn’t have gone. But his sister loves him, he remembers now. She will forgive him. His hands are tightening on the smooth wooden handle of the crab net as it rises above the water, and drops scatter, painfully bright. A flock of gulls wheels in the air. He is on a ferry, leaving the dock behind, leaving a white blur that swings back and forth like a handkerchief waved in a wide arc. He is riding in a dark car down a potholed lane, a boy pressed half asleep against his sister’s shoulder as they travel together down a bumpy road toward a room that smells of bread dough and potato peelings.
That simplicity of emotion summarizes this novel for me; it’s beautiful and a well-worthy read!
Thanks to Farrar, Straus, & Giroux for sending me a copy of the novel for review!